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Deborah Gregory's avatar

Kameron, this soulful poem invites me into that quiet tension between light and dark, storm and stillness ... a contemplative pause at the sacred threshold where cosmic rhythm meets human vulnerability.

For me, it evokes a pane within us, just beyond the solar reach, where silence meets sensation and the soul remembers its shape ... a threshold of light and shadow, always waiting to be touched.

It’s the kind of offering that feels perfect for Samhain ... a time when veils thin, and the inner windows open to mystery, memory and the unseen. Bravo! 🙏💖

Neo_Mythic_Scribe's avatar

What a painted and refreshing view of what it feels like to be taken out of the cycle. And to become enamored with its parts from the center of the clock.

It invites me to suspend my thoughts on what has been and what comes next. And to pay homage to the short moments I’ve been left alone to sit in with my thoughts. And all the moments that will be.

A microcosm/macrocosm dancing forever.

Well Done sir.

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